am trying to find ur face again...
that moment of time has long gone past,
yet the feelings have remained just the same...
a million faces in the crowd...
and none of them look familiar...
each with a smile to pass on to me...
and all i have is an unknown fear...
dissapointed im still searching to match,
the memory with which im bound...
i search far and wide with just one hope,
that maybe just maybe il'l find u around...
sometimes i spot someone close,
someone who resembles u in every way...
but on realising it can never be you,
i pull away having no words to say...
its true ur never coming back i know,
its true the search might never end...
they say as days go by,u tend to heal,
but even time refuses some broken hearts to mend!!
somtimes the heart travels the path of love only to get lost on the way and then quits and decides never to return...
P.S: blame the weather for inspiring this scribble :)
18 comments:
"somtimes the heart travels the path of love only to get lost on the way and then quits and decides never to return..."So true doc....
then why does it get lost..n thn y does it quit????nevertheless....
lemme ask u r u a mind reader ???? wel yeah docs r supoosd to b intelligent ;)..sadly to tel ya im undergoing this pain now..but Iam ok now..but while reading ur poem a silent small tear rolled up..but the way u put up words :) thts y this pri is an all rounder...
I dnt know whthr made sense or not but u did so much justice to the poetry for sure :)
keep it rocking
Love n hugs
Doc...
i read myself in this... :D
hehe, sometimes i wonder whether i can go into the past and change it a lil bit even so tat i can change my present... but then i realise, hello, wake up... not possible... :P
*sigh*
Well doc, the weather reminds me of a lot many things... lot many... i wrote all tat in the rain wala post...
but u know, u talk abt weather, n i talk of Delhi.. i hate to visit tat city, sounds funny na :P
i know but cant help it, i have all the good memories of that place and i dont want to remember all those, coz i think... thats the bitter truth of life :D
heeheh
Beautiful Post Doc!!!
This poem is really beautiful and every word fall in place... :)
Happy Weekend!!!
Keep Smiling :)
Cheers!!! :)
hi pri,
more of love is more of pain..
then also we love...
coz love is eternal :)
wow...tht was a nice piece of poetry..really felt it...btw blog updated :)
The story of my life..
And the weather must be quite good to inspire something like this.
SCRIBBLE?:)
Ippressive Priy!!!
Even broken hearts beat.
keep it rollin;)
"
sometimes i spot someone close,
someone who resembles u in every way...
but on realising it can never be you,
i pull away having no words to say..."
I liked this a lot..
this is touching...
wow! amazing..
can't say anything.. it is just perfect :)
@Scribbler... whatta nice line..
Even broken hearts beat!
Agreed with the last lines. :)
And Okay! I'll blame the weather. Rain Rain go away come again another day, lil Priyaka wants to play. :P
Har jagah its raning bas bambaiii is soo hawt. :(
talk abt the weather... all i can say is that its not being cooperative at all just now.
its pouring hard and i can hear lightning :( so obviously i can't seem to concentrate on what im supposed to be studyin...
on top of it all u write sucha beautiful poem that i can totally relate to...not fair!!
I have been travelling again .. and the weather has been great .. from cold in the hills to mild in the plains .. and its been great .. specially a spill of lil droplets in the valley makes greener then ever .. and ur lost in the view .. and prolly at those times the love is stronger in you ..
heart is a mean bastard .. i tell u :x .. it cries and it vows for what it knows is not easy to attain ..
I wish that you could find a similar face, and the heart accepts it to be what its been longing for ..
Awesome...Marvellous...Just the way i have been feelin. I wrote sumtin on the similar lines. have a look at it.
:(
Wow...lovely one...
We shudnt blame the weather...for that lobvely poem...but shud compliment it:_)))
too touchy!!!
**but even time refuses some broken hearts to mend
beautifully stated Pri!
Sometimes ppl just advise me to be happy, forget abt the past, do this, do that, be positive etc etc...and ur last line there summed up what I hv to say to them. In life, some ppl think that being positive is such a mandatory thing...it is I believe, but not to the extent that I'd hv to fake it.
Keshi.
kuch happy happy bhi lokho doc
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