August 16, 2009

tomorrow never comes

everytime she spoke to him,
a little more of her soul she bared...
and everytime he spoke to her,
he wondered if he really cared...


today shattered he sits and weeps,
defeated by an evil stroke of fate...
she lies there lifeless still in love,
he has realised he cares but a bit too late!!

7 comments:

Blog Boy said...

oh... this is a sensitive one!!
Nice.

aditi said...

Too beautiful for words

Anonymous said...

beautifully expressed...just loved it!!Short and sweet...

WritingsForLife said...

Yep, sometimes we figure out that we really want something after we lose it. Sigh.
Nicely done!

Anil Sawan said...

strong emotions there!

Pri said...

@ blogboy, aditi, athivas
thankyou!

@ sawan
:)

@ raaji
yes, realisations can change life in a positive way but only if they arrive at the right time...

gP said...

does everything runs out of time for those who have no capability to see beyond...

life is tragic indeed.