May 13, 2010

when...


when the sun in the sky ceases to shine...
when a circle transforms itself into a line...

when all the oceans in the world run dry...
when worms and rodents learn to fly...

when the colours of the rainbow change to grey...
when the chills of december feel like the heat of may...

when leaves begin to wither and flowers dont bloom...
when the world loses all hope and awaits impending doom...

when the moon turns blue and the stars fade away...
when the clock turns backward with each coming day...

when all hope dies and practicality begins to reign...
when every human mind turns insane...

when emotions finally begin to make sense...
and love starts to agree with logic intense...

when the world is made to come to an end...
and noone can call noone a friend....

perhaps that is when, i will stop missing you!!


P.S: yea, i can be quite a kid sometimes..especially when it comes to combining imagination and rhyme.

9 comments:

Lucifer said...

this is sooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!

Vinz said...

nice one..!!

:)

rahul said...
This comment has been removed by the author.
rahul said...

i deleted the above comment coz i don wanna die young.
but you will find it in ur mail box :P

criTics_anonYmous said...

pass!

Deepak said...

very nice description of missing someone.

and hey, there is an award waiting for u on my blog. visit and accept it :-)

Pri said...

@ mayz
but having to miss someone isnt! :(

@ vinz
thanks..let my kiddish side take over the rhyme :D

@ rahul
you are going to get killed anyways, one of these days..so watch out!! :-/
will take this up when we speak next

@ critics_anonymous
somehow, im not surprised..lol!

@ deepak
thanks for the award..im honoured! :)

IncorrigibleV said...

so cute, i like this... and it says what it has to say perfectly well!

MangoMan said...

cute in a way expecially when the reader is hell bent on relating it to something in his mind!